{"id":233,"date":"2014-09-05T00:00:00","date_gmt":"2014-09-05T00:00:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/yule-tide.generalsemiotics.net\/index.php\/2014\/09\/05\/post-226-how-to-maintain-your-health-an-essay-in-korean-written-by-me\/"},"modified":"2014-09-05T00:00:00","modified_gmt":"2014-09-05T00:00:00","slug":"post-226-how-to-maintain-your-health-an-essay-in-korean-written-by-me","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/yule-tide.blog\/index.php\/2014\/09\/05\/post-226-how-to-maintain-your-health-an-essay-in-korean-written-by-me\/","title":{"rendered":"Post-226: [My Korean Essay] How to Maintain Your Health"},"content":{"rendered":"
Below is an essay I wrote in Korean. It was originally written on paper in about twenty minutes. I have transcribed it here and added an English translation below.\n<\/div>\n
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\uac74\uac15\uc744 \uc9c0\ud0a4\uae30 \uc704\ud574\uc11c\ub294 \uc88b\uc740 \uc74c\uc2dd\uc744 \uba39\uc5b4\uc57c \ud558\uace0 \uc6b4\ub3d9\uc744 \ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4<\/strong><\/font>
\uc694\uc998 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc758 \uace0\ubbfc \uc911\uc5d0\uc11c \uac74\uac15\uc744 \uc81c\uc77c \uc911\uc694\ud558\uac8c \uc0dd\uac01\ud558\uae30 \ub54c\ubb38\uc5d0 \uc6b0\ub9ac\uac00 \uac74\uac15\uc744 \uc9c0\ud0a4\ub294 \uacc4\ud68d\uc744 \uc138\uc6cc\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7fc, \uc5b4\ub5bb\uac8c \uac74\uac15\uc744 \uc9c0\ud0ac \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\uae4c? \uccab \ubc88\uc9f8 \uac74\uac15\uc5d0 \uc88b\uc740 \uc74c\uc2dd\uc744 \uba39\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub450 \ubc88\uc9f8 \uc6b4\ub3d9\uc744 \uc790\uc8fc \ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc774\ub807\uac8c \ud558\uba74 \uc6b0\ub9ac\uc758 \uac74\uac15\uc774 \uc88b\uc544\uc9c8 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n

\uccab \ubc88\uc9f8, \ubb34\uc2a8 \uc74c\uc2dd\uc744 \uba39\ub294\uc9c0\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud560 \uac81\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc74c\uc2dd\uc774 \uc911\uc694\ud558\ub2c8\uae4c \uac74\uac15\uc5d0 \uc88b\uc740 \uc74c\uc2dd\uc744 \ud56d\uc0c1 \uba39\uc73c\uc138\uc694. \ub0a0\ub9c8\ub2e4 \ucc44\uc18c\ub97c \ub2e4\uc12f \uac1c \uc774\uc0c1 \uba39\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc65c \uc774\ub807\uac8c \uba39\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\uae4c? \ucc44\uc18c\uc5d0 \uc788\ub294 \ube44\ud0c0\ubbfc\uc774 \uc911\uc694\ud558\ub2c8\uae4c \ucc44\uc18c\ub97c \ub9ce\uc774 \uba39\uc5b4\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc778\uac04\uc758 \ubab8\uc5d0 \ube44\ud0c0\ubbfc\uc774 \uc5c6\uc73c\uba74 \uc8fd\uc744 \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \ucd08\ucf54\ub9bf\ud558\uace0 \uc124\ud0d5\uc774 \uc6b0\ub9ac \uac74\uac15\uc5d0 \ub098\uc069\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ucd08\ucf54\ub9bf\uc774\ub098 \uc0ac\ud0d5\uc744 \ub9ce\uc774 \uba39\uc73c\uba74 \ub6b1\ub6b1\ud558\uc9c8 \uc218\uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub6b1\ub6b1\ud55c \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc774 \uc608\uc058\uc9c0 \uc54a\uace0 \ubcd1\uc5d0 \uc790\uc8fc \uac78\ub9bd\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub6b1\ub6b1\ud55c \uc0ac\ub78c\ub3c4 \uc6b4\ub3d9\uc5d0 \ub098\uc069\ub2c8\ub2e4.<\/p>\n

\uadf8\ub7ec\ub2c8\uae4c \uc774\uc81c \uc6b4\ub3d9\uc5d0 \ub300\ud574\uc11c \ub354 \uc774\uc57c\uae30\ud569\uc2dc\ub2e4. \ub0a0\uc52c \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc774 \uc6b4\ub3d9\ud560 \uc218 \uc788\uc9c0\ub9cc \uc694\uc998 \uc0ac\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\ub4e4\uc774 \ubcf4\ud1b5 \uc6b4\ub3d9\uc744 \uc2eb\uc5b4\uc11c \uc6b4\ub3d9\uc744 \uc548 \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub7f0\ub370 \uc6b4\ub3d9\uc774 \uac74\uac15\uc5d0 \uc911\uc694\ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. \ub0a0\ub9c8\ub2e4 \uc6b0\ub9ac\uc758 \ub2e4\ub9ac\ub97c \uc774\uc6a9\ud574\uc11c \ud2bc\ud2bc\ud55c \ub2e4\ub9ac\ub85c \uc26c\uc6b4 \uc0dd\ud65c\uc774 \uc9c0\ub0bc \uc218 \uc788\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uadf8\ub9ac\uace0 \uc88b\uc740 \ubab8\uc774 \uc788\ub294 \uc0ac\ub78c\uc740 \uc77c\ucc0d \uc548 \uc8fd\uc2b5\ub2c8\ub2e4. \uc6b0\ub9ac\ub294 \ub9e4\uc8fc \uc138 \ubc88 \uc774\uc0c1 \uc6b4\ub3d9\uc744 \ud574\uc57c \ud569\ub2c8\ub2e4. [2014.9.4 \uc778\ucc9c\ubd80\ud3c9\uc5d0\uc11c \uc4f4 \uae00\uc785\ub2c8\ub2e4]

<\/span><\/span><\/em>[My Translation of this essay:]<\/span>\n<\/div>\n

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<\/span>Q. Write an essay of two paragraphs about the following subject: “What should we do in order to maintain our health?”<\/em><\/strong><\/font><\/p>\n

In Order to Maintain Health, We Have to Eat Good Food and Exercise<\/span><\/strong><\/font>
<\/span>These days, “health” is the most important of people’s concerns, and so we need to make a plan to keep ourselves healthy. How, then, can we maintain our health? Firstly, we need to eat healthful foods. Secondly, we need to exercise frequently. If we do these things, our health can get better and better.

First of all, I will talk about what kind of food<\/span><\/span>s we eat. Food is important for us, so we have to always eat healthful foods. We need to eat at least five servings of vegetables per day. Why should we eat like that? The vitamins in vegetables are important, so we need to eat a lot of them. Without vitamins in a human’s body, it can cause death. Also, chocolate and sugar are bad for our health.\u00a0 If we eat a lot of chocolate or sugar, we can become fat. Fat people don’t look good and they often get sick. Fat people are also bad at physical activities.

Therefore, let’s now talk some more about physical activities.<\/span><\/span> Thin people can exercise, but as people living today usually dislike exercising, they don’t do it. However, exercise is important for our health. We use our legs every day, so if we have strong legs, we can have an easier time in life. Also, people with strong bodies will not die early. We should exercise at least three times a week. <\/span>[End of essay] [Essay written on Sept. 4th, 2014 in Incheon]<\/em>\n<\/div>\n

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This essay was written in an unusually-quiet coffee shop in the Bupyeong neighborhood of the usually-noisy Seoul Megalopolis. Included here are some corrections for grammar by my Korean friend, H.J., the intrepid IT entrepreneur. I was helping him with an English thing at the time. He may soon work at one of the world’s most famous companies, the one which stole an obscure mathematics term and made it world-famous. You<\/em> know the one I mean.

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Update, September 12th:<\/strong> I didn’t realize it, but it turned out this essay was due to the teacher. Here is my final submitted essay. I received an above-average grade for the class, it seems, but the teacher marked many mistakes on it, anyway.
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